Need some critique!

xxmexxxxmexx Member Posts: 2
edited November -1 in Art, Graphics, Music and Sound
Just hoping to get some opinions on my level design. It's not quite what I'm used to working on, so I'm open to any ideas. It's going for a little bit of a cutesy feel (more with the characters when I add them, but a little with the level too), and the moon is going to have craters and possibly a "cute" face. (hoping for some input on that as well!)

*EDIT* Updated/Better Picture: http://cl.ly/2C402j3n1p372l1x1z2r

http://cl.ly/2r2a1g1y1C0h08433G2Z
Sorry about the "watermark"; just wanted to keep anyone from stealing my "masterpiece" too easily! :-P

Thanks!

Comments

  • tenrdrmertenrdrmer Member, Sous Chef, Senior Sous-Chef Posts: 9,934
    Well to be honest its pretty plain looking. it would help to know what type of game maybe add in some game elements. Theres nothing in particular wrong with the art its just plain as is.
  • magic101himagic101hi Member Posts: 713
    It looks good but as tenrdrmer said it looks to plain.

    -Josh
  • magic101himagic101hi Member Posts: 713
    Sorry Double Post :/
  • xxmexxxxmexx Member Posts: 2
    I guess I should've been more clear. It's not complete yet. I was mostly just asking about the general style. It's going to be a sidescrolling shooter/fighting game.

    Here's a slightly updated version with some changes and game elements:
    http://cl.ly/2C402j3n1p372l1x1z2r
  • FranzKellerFranzKeller Member Posts: 517
    looks fine! Now you need - some characters ;-)
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