Save Patchland update! (possible screens for app store... need feedback)

goliathgoliath Member Posts: 1,440
edited November -1 in Working with GS (Mac)
Hello everyone. About a week ago I posted a topic on the forums outlining my new game called Save Patchland and I thought I'd give you guys a quick update. I am almost finished and development is coming along really well. Below are the screens that I am thinking about submitting to the app store and I just wanted some feedback on them.

I also (fingers crossed) included a video below just in case you missed my previous post. I plan on making a more "official trailer" for the game but this should give you a quick look on the title. I also have updated the graphics since the video so I will be sure to do another one soon. Thanks and please let me know what you think.

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http://www.youtube.com/user/gameonnintendo#p/a/u/0/h6lOHrDWsZw

Comments

  • goliathgoliath Member Posts: 1,440
    sorry that the youtube embed didn't work....
  • OaklandasfanOaklandasfan Member Posts: 213
    you can't embed videos from ur channel. This game strangely reminds me of Kirby's epic yarn...
  • OaklandasfanOaklandasfan Member Posts: 213
    change the falling things from stars to something else. Does it get harder as you go along? Also, add some new powerups
    (so you are a little different than TSB's template)
    Just some advice.
  • magic101himagic101hi Member Posts: 713
    Fixed Video link



    -Josh
  • magic101himagic101hi Member Posts: 713
    Also having the audio on a loop like that would piss me off if I bought that game plus I can tell that all the sounds are from GarageBand.

    Sorry if I am harsh (Just got off a 17 Hour plane ride) but think of it as constructive criticism.

    -Josh
  • goliathgoliath Member Posts: 1,440
    Thanks guys for the feedback I appreciate it.

    I was going for an epic yarn feel as I love that game. It may have an influence on my next title as well but we will see.
  • goliathgoliath Member Posts: 1,440
    bump

    Just wanted to see if anyone else wanted to give some input. This is the last time i'll do this=)

    Thanks for the above input as well guys!
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