★Cheeseman 2D platformer a la meat boy is RELEASED finally!!!★

hich4mhich4m Member, PRO Posts: 142
edited December 2011 in Announce Your Game!
Hello guys it's been a long time since i haven't posted an update about the game.
but now all the struggling is finished , The game is released you can get it here :)
http://itunes.apple.com/app/cheeseman/id453725308?mt=8

i hope you will enjoy it and support me by leaving some appstore reviews

thank you GameSalad Community , you're the best !!

here is the launch trailer :
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Comments

  • CannonFodderCannonFodder Member Posts: 230
    It looks great mate, good luck with sales :-)
  • hich4mhich4m Member, PRO Posts: 142
    Thank you Golden :)
  • ozboybrianozboybrian PRO Posts: 2,102
    WOW... Excellent for GS. Excellent for a platformer.
    You'll do great : )
  • hich4mhich4m Member, PRO Posts: 142

    thank you oz , i hope this would sell:)
  • SparkyidrSparkyidr Member, PRO Posts: 2,033
    Looks really good :)
    good luck with it
  • hich4mhich4m Member, PRO Posts: 142
    thanks Sparky :)
  • HoneyTribeStudiosHoneyTribeStudios Member Posts: 1,792
    Looks like it worked out well in the end from the trailer. Good luck with it, I'll give it a download now. Hope it plays well too ;)
  • Player_EPlayer_E Member, PRO Posts: 604
    Looks like a winner man
  • hich4mhich4m Member, PRO Posts: 142
    thank you honeyTribe & Player_E
    i hope you will like it please leave a review at the appstore if you do :)
    and i would be very interested to know your feedback after playing the game

    i love GS community :D kind of forgot that since i was away for a long time from the forums :)
  • hich4mhich4m Member, PRO Posts: 142
    anybody tried the game yet ?
  • TeamLava8TeamLava8 Member, BASIC Posts: 294
    I played through a good chunk of it, and my oh my. This is to date my favorite platformer next to league of evil. Which is saying a lot. I hope to dear lord you are promoting this game. The level design is spot on and it has enough of a mix between fast paced and cool and careful, that I am impressed. if you are reading this and haven't yet gave it a go. I highly recommend it. I hope touch arcade eats this thing up.
  • ozboybrianozboybrian PRO Posts: 2,102
    I'll share it on https://www.facebook.com/ListYourTopiPhoneGame

    Please like that page to. Great stuff man!!!
  • Mcreator83Mcreator83 Member Posts: 120
    haha looks awesome :D and fun as well! well done and good luck with it!
  • mithraweptmithrawept Member, PRO Posts: 167
    Looks amazing (yet cheesy!) hich.
  • hich4mhich4m Member, PRO Posts: 142
    @jaylee : thank you very much , happy to hear that , i sent mails to a lot of reviewers , and there is a thred in touch arcade forum also about it , and i put some ans in slide to play(side banner) and pocket gamers(iphone section) , but the sales are not that good , also the reviewers are kind of very busy with all the new apps that came this month :( , i wish if touchArcade make a review about it .

    @ oz : thank you for the share , i clicked like with both the page and private account :)

  • MotherHooseMotherHoose Member Posts: 2,456
    Wow! had to quick buy this one! and, tell the family …

    looks delicious!

    MH
  • calvin9403calvin9403 Member Posts: 3,186
    Love the drawing of the cheese!

  • hich4mhich4m Member, PRO Posts: 142
    @tshirtbooth : thank you so much , and thank you for the great tutorials you provided the comunity :) , that helped me a lot .

    @MotherHoose : i hope you will like it :)

    @calvin9403 : it could be better i guess, i'm planning to change the icon :)
  • balsamicodebalsamicode Member Posts: 36
    Hey man that looks totally awesome! Except for the icon in the iTunes Store (it's a bit of a turn off IMHO). Why not use the two main characters as seen on your blog post (Oct 8)? Music is fantastic too and really adds to the game. Hard to believe that sales are not good. Very well done, congrats!!
  • hich4mhich4m Member, PRO Posts: 142
    yes you are totally right about the icon , i'm thinking about making an update with just the icon , what do you all think ? is it a good idea or bad
  • balsamicodebalsamicode Member Posts: 36
    It think the icon is the only downer, but a major one. Many choose to take a closer look at a game when the icon is appealing. If the app icon looks bad, people won't even click it in the first place. Once you got them on your app info page where they see the screenshots, chances increase that someone will actually buy it.
  • Benjamin_m5Benjamin_m5 Member Posts: 646
    edited December 2011
    I think this is a good idea.
    I made this too with my game. After the better icon-update sales are going better :) i think the icon is a very important thing of a game, because people see the icon as the first thing of a game at the AppStore. Because when i'm looking for new and good apps at the AppStore, i don't open apps or games with a bad icon. I open mostly just apps or games with a nice icon!!!
    But that's just my thought.

    Bought your game and it's really nice!! Very good work. Work's very well on my iPhone 4. Congratulation and good luck with sales

    I think you should remove the glossy shape from the icon too, because i think the most icons looks better without the glossy shape.

    Edit: @balsamicode +1 (Think the same as you :)
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    Benjamin
  • hich4mhich4m Member, PRO Posts: 142
    i will do it today then , please can you let me know which one you prefere ?
    http://cheeseman.alphanoize.com/sharing/iconNew1.png
    http://cheeseman.alphanoize.com/sharing/iconNew2.png
  • SparkyidrSparkyidr Member, PRO Posts: 2,033
    The 2nd one looks classier.
    How does it look scaled down on the device though?
  • hich4mhich4m Member, PRO Posts: 142
    i guess it looks okey when scaled , the characters are small but should be okey , but the 1st one looks better when is scaled down for me :)
  • SparkyidrSparkyidr Member, PRO Posts: 2,033
    Yeah. that's kinda what I thought.
    The second one has a much cooler/interesting look for me. The first one is more striking...but, and excuse the pun, looks a bit cheesier ;)
  • balsamicodebalsamicode Member Posts: 36
    The first one looks a bit scary. The second one is good, but I'd rearrange it a bit.
    Idea 1: just the two main actors prominent in the foreground (remove the UFO bad guy)
    Idea 2: arrange the UFO bad guy right behind the heroes (lower him, not necessary to see the whole UFO)

    Icons should be simple, without too many distractions.
  • hich4mhich4m Member, PRO Posts: 142
    hahah yeah i know what you mean :D
  • balsamicodebalsamicode Member Posts: 36
    edited December 2011
    Also the colors and the background match better in the second pic.
  • hich4mhich4m Member, PRO Posts: 142
    @balsamicode : i will try this right away
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