what do you think about my first menu ?

daaddddaaddd Member Posts: 116
edited February 2012 in Art, Graphics, Music and Sound
hey guys, i'm creating my first game and i would like to know your opinion about how my menu is :)

http://i40.tinypic.com/s23zlv.png

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  • GLGAMESGLGAMES SingaporeMember Posts: 988
    edited February 2012
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    there you go.
  • LeonardDeveloperLeonardDeveloper Member Posts: 4,630
    Cant see iT!
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    Try tiny pic for hosting it...
  • daaddddaaddd Member Posts: 116
    sorry, new link available!!
  • SAZ_1SAZ_1 Member Posts: 397
    looks cool... only thing is the text might be small depending on what device your making the app for...on the iphone i think it will be small
  • SAZ_1SAZ_1 Member Posts: 397
    on second thought its actually got me intrigued ... whats the game all about??
  • daaddddaaddd Member Posts: 116
    you will see very soon on appstore muahaha , i think lots of people will like it
  • beefy_clyrobeefy_clyro Member Posts: 5,394
    Yeh i like the menu but agree the text seems too small
  • GLGAMESGLGAMES SingaporeMember Posts: 988
    leaf cutting game? :P
  • SpriteAttackSpriteAttack Member Posts: 524
    looks like someone has to differ here... it might as well be me... I am sorry and I am going to be brutally honest here... this screen just sucks... there is no structure in there (what's what, what's important, what's clickable), the elements are unreadable, the font choice is poor, the colours don't match (it's different greens alright but they are not matching at all - one is greyish, one is yellowish and one is olive).

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  • beefy_clyrobeefy_clyro Member Posts: 5,394
    ^^ Thank You for making us all seem silly ;)
  • SpriteAttackSpriteAttack Member Posts: 524
    @beefy_clyro - my pleasure... ;)
  • daaddddaaddd Member Posts: 116
    edited February 2012
    thank u for helping me, it was my first one.. i'm here to learn , everyone has to start somewhere, anyway, thanks :) you made this with adobe illustrator? i really liked it, i will forget the old one and go with this new
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