Peoples opinions on this upgrade menu

JordeyyJordeyy Member Posts: 409
edited February 2013 in Working with GS (Mac)
Could People please give me there opinions , on my new upgrade menu

Could you tell me if it looks nice

And looks proffesional

http://gyazo.com/14b412ef8bc6577dc7ed52536c71a56f

http://gyazo.com/b9671580537d6f7f9e1df1a167ccca21

Comments

  • beefy_clyrobeefy_clyro Member Posts: 5,394
    I'd personally center the buttons in the big box. I would also keep to the same amount of upgrades, one has four whilst the rest have 3, I'd have them all 3 or all 4
  • JordeyyJordeyy Member Posts: 409
    @beefy_clyro do you mean like this bro ?
    http://gyazo.com/ab5028172411f097b505f950084c87c3
  • beefy_clyrobeefy_clyro Member Posts: 5,394
    Yes looks much more aligned. I would also shrink speed demon a tiny bit so you could centre that above the bike between the 2 arrow
  • JordeyyJordeyy Member Posts: 409
    @beefy_clyro like this bro ? http://gyazo.com/1973804ecb8f9569e8b86414d71bee70
  • beefy_clyrobeefy_clyro Member Posts: 5,394
    Maybe increase the size now of speed demon so the word fits in nicely but just keep it centred, looks a lot nicer on the eyes. Compare that now to the 1st pic and you'll see it just looks better :)
  • JordeyyJordeyy Member Posts: 409
    @beefy_clyro do you think the design as a whole , is nice ?
  • gyroscopegyroscope I am here.Member, Sous Chef, PRO Posts: 6,598

    I like it a lot, @Jordeyy ; more than acceptable graphics. Congrats on getting your first game together; nice to see you're getting an eye for detail! :-)
  • beefy_clyrobeefy_clyro Member Posts: 5,394
    Yup, nice and clean on the whole :)
  • RiffelRiffel Member Posts: 1,272
    edited February 2013
    why I cant use <$img src="imageURL"> to show images?

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  • JordeyyJordeyy Member Posts: 409
    @Riffel why , what was you going to do bro ?
  • JordeyyJordeyy Member Posts: 409
    @gyroscope thanks a lot bro , i really appreciate it :)
  • JordeyyJordeyy Member Posts: 409
    @beefy_clyro thanks for your help bro :)
  • KnightStarKnightStar Member Posts: 162
    Your Art looks great.. My only comment is with the guy on the bike - was it intended to have him flying off the ground? He appears to be in mid-flight vs. touching the ground and driving.. Short of that, it looks great!

    - J
  • beefy_clyrobeefy_clyro Member Posts: 5,394
    No worries. What riffel is saying is, use the below link and delete out the $ sign and it will embed your pictures into the thread so people dont have to click a link

    <$img src="http://gyazo.com/b9671580537d6f7f9e1df1a167ccca21.png">
  • JordeyyJordeyy Member Posts: 409
    @beefy_clyro oooo i get you now, i will keep that in mind, for future reference

    @KnightStar also the bike was just meant to be there to look at , not realy driving or in mid air if you get me , i didnt mean for him to be doing any
  • SnapFireStudiosSnapFireStudios Member Posts: 1,603
    I think it looks nice, you used TSB's/GSHelper's art pack right?

    One more suggestion. It appears that your text in the boxes is a bit random. For example, Run-Up is to far in, and even though Weight may be at the same'hight as the others, it would look better if you nudged it down slightly because of that hard--cornered "W".

    Hope this helps,
    - Thomas
  • JordeyyJordeyy Member Posts: 409
    @beefy_clyro
    @gyroscope
    @Riffel

    Here Is my game so far , with the upgrade menu on it

    The upgrade menu isnt working yet , you can flick throught the 2 bikes , (i will be including mkore bikes) but you cannot buy them yet.

    also my score is working now but i havnt included the saving coins just yet

    http://arcade.gamesalad.com/game/110129
  • beefy_clyrobeefy_clyro Member Posts: 5,394
    Heres my opinions which I wrote in a different thread of yours;


    Lots of work needed from what I see;

    The rub feature appears horrible, the bike hardly seems to move! Its better if you go across the whole screen and not just where it says rub.

    When you crash on that one, the bike stays where it is and the character slides off screen whilst floating in the air! It should be the bike goes off screen and the character stays.

    You can wheelie and crash on this level without moving! On the other level you cannot do this until you are moving!

    On the other level the character randomly changes colour throughout.

    Some parts of your hud on the 1st level is really crisp where others are quite dull.

    Anyway, theres a few points, hope you find it useful!



    As for the upgrades menu, when cycling between the different bikes, make sure ALL actors are in exactly the same position, which they are currently not, and at the same sizes.

    Also, on the cost upgrade of on the bike, centre align that button with the name button from above!
  • JordeyyJordeyy Member Posts: 409
    @beefy_clyro bro i have not worked on the obstacle course level yet, that's why its messed up
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