Your opinion about my first game & first level

adlaimadlaim Member Posts: 68
in Working with GS (Mac)
Hi

This is my game , called challenge the pixel , it is have more than 50 levels or mini games , The game tests your mind and your speed and reAction and your patience ..

you get some coins after finish any level , coins help you to overcome level ( if you think it difficult )

NOTE : the design is Preliminary :)

Comments

  • -Timo--Timo- Member Posts: 2,313
    very funny ;) nice graphics
  • adlaimadlaim Member Posts: 68
    @timolapre1998 thank's
  • jonmulcahyjonmulcahy Member, Sous Chef Posts: 10,408
    it looks good for a first game, but spend some time on polishing up the design. Some things I noticed:

    1. the awards on the main menu are a different art style from the rest of the game
    2. the text in all your text boxes (e.g. Destroy 15 Pixels as fast as you can) is not centered
    3. Button / UI styles are different. e.g. the home and reset buttons have are blue with a glossy effect, the timers are flat blue boxes
    4. when you hit the button around 1.24, a gray/green button slides out from a blue button. the colors don't really go well together, and it looks out of place.

    just keep repeating to yourself 'consistency, consistency, consistency!'. You want to come up with a design framework, color scheme, font choices, button sizes, etc. Then apply that framework to every single thing in your game.
  • SirioGarciaSirioGarcia Member Posts: 52
    Great! @adlaim
  • adlaimadlaim Member Posts: 68
    edited July 2013
    @jonmulcahy great advice ..
    Thank you very much
  • adlaimadlaim Member Posts: 68
    @SirioGarcia Ooooh thank's
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