Bunny Hop Trailer

blue_elephantblue_elephant Member Posts: 505
in Working with GS (Mac)
Tell me what you think. I think i'm gonna make another one so tell me what it needs.

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  • joshiwujoshiwu Member Posts: 207
    this game is cool. I would make the circle larger and maybe wind effects in the grass. and obviously creatures and coins
  • VolontaArtsVolontaArts Member Posts: 510
    nice... looks fun.
  • blue_elephantblue_elephant Member Posts: 505
    Heres an updated trailer. I think this one is much better, tell me what you think.
  • a1000milesa1000miles Member Posts: 36
    edited August 2013
    Hey @blue_elephant. Game looks good. I prefer the music on the updated trailer. I find the black screens with words a bit of an "interrupt". Personally, I would prefer the words to be flashed across the screen while the game is still showing. Just my opinion though .. feel free to completely disregard :)
  • The_Gamesalad_GuruThe_Gamesalad_Guru Member Posts: 9,922
    edited August 2013
    Yeah to be honest it drags. Look at some other trailers and see how to edit for maximum impact. Quick cuts on the beat are fundamentals for this type of editing. Plus I doubt you own the rights to that song. I'm surprised YouTube's filter didn't flag it for copyright violation.
  • FajlajpFajlajp Member Posts: 666
    I agree with @a1000miles. And if you want it that way(gameplay,cut,word,gameplay)I don't like when it's a totally black screen with a White word written in that simple font. Keep it simple but not to simple.
  • StormyStudioStormyStudio United KingdomMember Posts: 3,989
    Looking good... it is nice to see something being created with one of my free templates ... good luck with it... (I assume its with my template). If you keep adding to it and do some well timed promotion you could get some extra sales around Easter...
  • blue_elephantblue_elephant Member Posts: 505
    @stormystudio Thanks! I've had it around for a while so I'm not sure if its your template so it definitely could be!

    I'll try to make an update with some of these suggestions
  • blue_elephantblue_elephant Member Posts: 505
    Another trailer with amazon.
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